Chap 69- A fishy tale ;)

Chap 68

Helloooooooooo Sunday sundae is here yet again..this week relax sit back and enjoy the action ;)) We r off to tropical waters…Annie ka request…I hope I haven’t forgotten anything. Full of masti ;)) It end a bit abruptly as my fingers got caught in cupboard and I couldn’t type properly for a couple of days, but I hope u enjoy the errrr..extra curricular activities and the dialogue especially ;)) Please do comment and excuse the mishtakesss ;))

“Maan please tell me where we are going! Or I am not coming.” She stomped her foot as he walked in with a grin on his face.

Lifting her clean off the floor into his arms he twirled her around until she begged him to stop.

“I am so dizzy! Put me down!”

Warm brown eyes sparkled back at her, filled full of love. In the last two weeks she has recovered exceedingly well. Her colour was back and she had put on the weight she had lost aftr the attack.

Daadima walked in to see Geet in her grandsons arms and both engrossed in each other.

“Ahem Ahem!” She grinned at Geet’s blush and Maan’s wide smile. Geet struggled to get down but he made no attempt to put her down.

“Maan please put me down!” Geet whispered urgently, blushing furiously.

“Here are your tickets, a courier dropped them off earlier. And one strict rule about this holiday, Maan you are not to work whilst you are there! I want you both to relax and enjoy this honeymoon.”

“I have every intention of enjoying myself…” he said out loudly, “ We shall take complete rest daadima, don’t you worry,” then in Geet’s ear. “I think we will be spending it mostly in bed.”

A fresh tidal wave of colour hit her cheeks.

“Maan meri bahu ko taang maat karo!” Daadima grinned, then dropping a quick kiss on Geet’s cheek she parted saying, “chaalo beta I have a hundred things to do, I am going, I will see you both later before you fly off.”

“Where are we going?” She asked again as daadima left the room. “I don’t know what to pack!” She turned back to the mountain of clothes she had left on the bed.

“Kuch maat pack kaaro…” his tone was a smooth as silk as his arms slid around her from behind and cupped her breasts.

Instantly she was on fire. She craved his hands on her skin, she craved his mouth on her. That sinful mouth that could set her on fire as it explored and suckled, leaning back into him she revelled in his caresses.

“Maan..please..” she wanted him so badly.

“Bas..I want you like this all the time, but you will have to wait until we get there.”

“That’s not fair!” she rasped as he ran his thumbs over her already peaking nipples, she was ready to explode. Getting her own back on him she leaned back and wriggled her bottom against his pelvis.

He moved away instantly, he was already so turned on he knew he would explode if she carried on.

She turned towards him and gave him the full effect of her arousal, knowing it would drive him to the edge. Her eyes were clouded with passion, her breathing unsteady. She reached out for his hand, her slender fingers enclosing around his wrist, pulling it up she checked the time.

A grin broke out on his face. “Nahi Mishty!

She pushed at his chest in a gesture of impatience. “Maan, but we have plenty of time, our flight is much later this evening, but if you dont want me….” Her eyes filled with hurt and she turned walked away towards the door.

Suddenly she found herself pinned to a wall. With his foot he kicked the door shut, reaching out to push the stopper shut with a click.

The heat in his eyes was unmistakable, her breath caught in her throat.

“I want you so much my Mishty… have no idea!”

“Then….?” her eyes probed his, was he still thinking she wasn’t well enough? He had been treating her with kid gloves these last two weeks.

“I wanted to go slow…take our time..I want to make it special for you, love you with care, take you to somewhere special.”

“What if I don’t want slow? What if I want ..” Her eyes blazed with passion “…Maan….”

“Say it..”.he rasped out. She was always more than he ever hoped for. He wanted her to say that she was burning in the same flames.

“I….I don’t need to go anywhere! Special is in your arms…I don’t want slow…I need you, I crave you..NOW!”

She pulled at his shirt, the buttons flew open, wrenching it apart let she let her hands roam over his bare skin, scoring her nails down his torso right down to the belt of his jeans, tugging it open.

A deep throated moan escaped him, all thoughts of slow went out of his head. His hands reached for the hem of her top and he pulled it off in one full swoop, catching her hands in his he pinned them above her head whilst his mouth created havoc against the arched column of her throat and worked its way down raining kisses over her. She had already catapulted into a wired state, and as his tongue licked through the lace of her bra, she panted with need.

“Maan! Let go off me..I need to feel you!” Her whisper was urgent, tortured even.

“No!” The sound burst from him like a bullet. “You have no idea how on the edge I have been all week, sleeping in your arms and stopping myself from loving you. I wanted to take my time and love you properly but god help me, I cant stop myself!”

His free hand flicked open the button of her jeans and he pushed them off her with undue haste, taking her panties with them, dealing with own jeans at the same time, he freed himself. He was breathing hard. He watched her face..her eyes were amber slits in a flushed face, her mouth, it needed his attention he decided….he kissed it hard only releasing it when she heaved to breathe. As he left it, her pink lush lips were mouthing his name over and over again but no comprehensible sentence was coming out. His free had hand found her and was busy stroking deeply.

Her moans of pleasure washed over him, he could hear her need, he could wait no longer.

Burying his face in her neck he thrust up into her.

Her scream of pleasure rocked him. Letting go off her hands, he reached down to cup her bottom and lifted her against the wall thrusting into her with exquisite force again and again.

“Maan! Yes….” her moans drove him on. She was already climaxing, he could feel it and it was sending him over the edge all too soon.

Her teeth sank into his shoulder as she gave into the vortex of pleasure. He thrust up again and again until the release he was seeking burst through him like a raging storm.

Spent and completely exhausted they sank down to the floor both breathing like marathon runners.

“Mishty!” He gasped out pulling her close into him, the grin on his face made her heart lift.

A grin broke out on her face…”Now….. that was something extra special!”

A day and a half later they were practically marooned on a island so beautiful it made her catch her breath. Daadima had given them a trip to Fiji and not only that they were to spend their time on an exclusive island enclosed in their own villa right on the water front but a butler and cook was included. Part of the villa flowed into the water on raised stilts. Geet looked through the thick glass on the floor at the view of the tropical fish with sheer delight.

“Maan dekho! So many colours and shapes! Maan!” She squealed with delight, “look there are big fish too. Wow! they are big and so blue!” she was kneeling on the floor by now and he eyed her delectable bottom with a heated look until the butler attracted his attention with a proposal.

Turning to look at why he wasn’t joining her she saw he was busy dealing with the man who had brought their bags. He was to be their butler and his wife their cook, she had already prepared everything and left it for them in the fridge. He seemed to be in the middle of discussion with him and smiling. The butler was gesturing wildly with his hands. Maan was grinning and nodding, after a few more discussion the butler left after showing him where everything was located and telling him that he would see him in the morning. Leaving him to it she went back to the amazing world below her.

Shutting the door behind the butler, Maan walked over to her and slid down on the floor beside her.

She was lying flat with her nose pressed to the glass, her squeals of ‘OMG! Wow and Fab!’ Made him grin.

“Mishty,” he said softly edging closer.

“hmmm….” her eyes were huge amber pools of delight but they were still trained on the coral reef they could see below.

“Mishty..” He slid closer and raising himself up on his elbow, he moved the swath of hair from across her back to place kisses in its stead.

“Maan! What are you doing, look at this look at that one! Oh thats not a fish its a Kachuwa!


“Hmm..Maan..its huge!” Her hand flicked at something that was tickling her.

“Something else is huge too…” he muttered sliding her zip down deftly and parting the edges.

“Are there really big fish here? As big as buses?” She raised her self slightly still totally absorbed in the activity below to even realise what he was up to.

“Haan yaha sab kuch ‘big’ hai!” He took the chance as she raised her self to deftly pull her top down.

She wriggled impatiently at whatever was tickling her.

“I want to see everything!”

“Haan…I have every intention of showing you everything.”

He removed his clothes eyeing the enormous bed through the adjoining open door with hope, but his Mishty didn’t look as if she was ever going to move from this glass floor. Twisting he pulled a soft white rug across to both of them with a sigh, the bed would have to wait.

Settling himself comfortably on the rug he raised himself again on one elbow and turned towards her, letting his finger tips playfully on the bare skin of her back.

“But Maan there is so many macchars here! They must be huge too!” She groaned twisting her arm back to itch as she felt tickling yet again on her back. She sat up and promptly and her top fell down to her waist.

“OH!” She looked in shock down naked self and then turned to Maan who was lying completely naked next to her with a huge smile on his face and not a stitch on.


Reaching for her he pulled her on top of him in a easy fluid move and rasped out, “now let me show you how ‘big’ things can get around here!”

“You are insatiable!” But she was already burning for him…..then a thought struck her.

“But the fish..the glass…”she moaned as he finished undressing her, “its see through!”

He eyed the fish through the glass his brow raised.

“OMG!” He mimicked her, “they’re naked too! Mishty close your eyes or they will get embarrassed!”

“Chaddo!” She slapped him playfully and swooped down to kiss those sinful lips that were teasing her so mercilessly.

No more was said for a long time after that…just felt.

The next morning he made sure she was up very early, the butler came and took them to a pier from where they went off on a small speedboat to a few miles out on the ocean.

“Where are we going?” She shouted with a smile above the din of the engine.

“Its a surprise, you wanted to see ‘big’ na?”

A carefree laugh escaped him as she blushed bright red.

“Maan! Stop teasing, where are we going?”

Just then the companion of the boat driver spotted something and they all turned to look at where he was pointing.

On top of the waves Geet saw some huge fins racing across the water. Her mouth fell open in surprise.

“Whale sharks!” Maan shouted to her.


“Sharks! EEEKKKKKK!”

Laughter burst from him as he grabbed the snorkels the butler had organised for them. “Geet let me show you how to put these on.

Err…she looked at the snorkels and the huge fish that were coming up with their mouths gaping open.”

“Maan…I …I don’t know how to swim, I don’t want to go in there.” She eyed the rolling waves with horror.

“Mishty mein hoon na…fikker mmat karo. Now put this in your mouth and breathe through it…yes in out out..big breaths.”

Within minutes he had her in a life jacket and snorkel was fitted on her whilst she practised breathing through the snorkel.

“Now when I say jump, jump in and we will be able to see them below the waves.”

With the snorkel in her mouth she couldn’t even say no, seeing the fright in her eyes he lifted her in his arms and went to the end of the boat whilst she squealed like banshee.

He grinned at her with the snorkel in his mouth and jumped into the waves.

The cold water hit her like a shock and her arms flailed in the water.

But he held her fast and soothed her helping her to relax until she calmed. Pointing down he urged her to look.

Below her was the most wondrous sight she had ever seen of huge whale sharks swimming with grace and fluidity. Her fear was forgotten as he held on to her at all times even though she had her life jacket on. They floated and he pulled her along with him as the whales swam around the boat coming up to feed with their mouths gaping open .

After a while he helped her back into the boat. Giving her hand to take her equipment off.

With a huge smile and tears in her eyes she looked at him with love. Smiling he gathered her in his arms and told the boat driver to take them back.


28 responses to “Chap 69- A fishy tale ;)

  1. Sarah

    September 29, 2013 at 10:09 am

    Hawwwtttt!!!! Loved it Janey babes and the shark scene, loved how you wrote it 🙂

    • janememe

      September 29, 2013 at 10:11 am

      it could have been better ;( If I had more time sighhhhhhh but thanks anyway 😉

  2. Ramya

    September 29, 2013 at 10:25 am

    Wonderful Coral Reef.Superb Janey.

    • janememe

      September 29, 2013 at 10:55 am

      thanks Ramya ;))

  3. honeygrape

    September 29, 2013 at 10:32 am

    lovvvlyy one….dint expect a lovey dovey update today….but thats exactly i got today…loved it…u tk care of urself n stay away from cupboards;)

    • janememe

      September 29, 2013 at 10:55 am

      LOLL glad u enjoyed ;)) Cupboards are following me ;))

  4. menakkrish

    September 29, 2013 at 12:27 pm

    Wooooowwwww:-):-):-) beautiful part:-):-) loved…simply great:-):-)

    • janememe

      September 30, 2013 at 10:34 am

      Thanks menakkrish looking at all those smileys u enjoyed it ;)) Brill!!!!

  5. Naina

    September 29, 2013 at 1:00 pm

    sooo much hotttttttttt fishy……..but i ate all n enjoy it fully 😉 ……TAKE CARE dear

    • janememe

      September 30, 2013 at 10:35 am

      hahahahha a fishy story indeed ;)) Thanks naina 😉

  6. Prachi

    September 29, 2013 at 1:40 pm

    OMG!!! Shooooo cute!!! Great update as usual Janey!!!!

    • janememe

      September 30, 2013 at 10:36 am

      Aww thanks Prachi , great as usual…O thats a compliment indeed 😉

  7. anupamachem

    September 29, 2013 at 2:12 pm

    it was really very fishy!!!! after a long time only maaneet. Great update. Hope your hand is fine now!!

    • janememe

      September 30, 2013 at 10:36 am

      yes a long time maaneet only- yeah hand is fine , silly clumsy me 😉 Hota hai Hota hai 😉

  8. Naina

    September 29, 2013 at 6:43 pm

    So much howwwwwtttttttttt fish………….but i ate all n enjoy fully 😉 …….TAKE CARE DEAR 🙂

  9. TeeJey-TJ

    September 29, 2013 at 8:00 pm

    Wowowow…. Awesome tht was…
    I guess, u hv written it as u hv seen them sometime back on ur holiday… It was so real…. N the hotness oozed out… Awesomeness this was…
    Continue soon… Love u loads.. 😀 :* ❤

    • janememe

      September 30, 2013 at 10:37 am

      Yes I went whale shark watching and swimming with them 😉 It was awesome, scary but fun. Love u loads too TJ ;))

  10. savitha.

    September 30, 2013 at 4:30 am

    aaahhhhhhh..hawwt update..Maan is so sweet ❤ ❤ take care of your fingers janey 🙂

    • janememe

      September 30, 2013 at 10:38 am

      Thanks Savitha Maan is always so sweet unless he is being dust danav ;))

  11. savitha.

    September 30, 2013 at 4:32 am

    actually this reminded me of the dolphin watch we used to go in Muscat..ofcourse we never went snorkeling but this did remind me of that..watching dolphins in natural is something exhilarating 🙂

    • janememe

      September 30, 2013 at 10:39 am

      Ohh I love to go Dolphin watching ;)) They r so intelligent, watching them play is just the most awesome thing in teh world 😉

  12. Chetna

    September 30, 2013 at 5:59 am

    hi dear! Fantabulous hawt update!Maaneet on HM! Maan teasing her! update soon!

    • janememe

      September 30, 2013 at 11:03 am

      Thanks Chetna ;)) did u like the nok jhok 😉 hahahahaha

  13. Annie Jose

    September 30, 2013 at 9:47 am

    Fabulous, brilliant, fantastic, awesome update Jane :-* thank you sooooo much for weaving the undersea picture, it was sheer magic 🙂

    • janememe

      September 30, 2013 at 11:04 am

      aww Annie glad you liked it- I could have done a lot more but phingers and time not permitting anyhow I gave you a taster 😉

  14. nesha2017

    March 5, 2018 at 5:14 pm


    • janememe

      March 5, 2018 at 5:47 pm

      Paradise mein mangal ;))


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