TPRS2 – chap 1 to 35

The Phoenix Rises – TPR Season 2

Hope you all enjoyed TPR before, I am now starting season two. I hope you support me and enjoy as you did season one 😉 Thank you all again from the bottom of my heart! In season two I am looking to explore new tracks, maybe intro a few new characters as we go along and bring in some well loved ones.

This Sundae will be short, as I am still thinking about tracks and formatting in my mind so enjoy the bite size! Those of you who haven’t read the FF Madhubala – A new venture, do have a go, you may enjoy that too that will be updated midweek.

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Chap 1- Obstinate partners!

“M…Maan s…sir that Dan Emmerson ke secretary ka phir se phone aaya tha! They want to make an appointment with you desperately.”

“Uh..uh…” Maan muttered his eyes fixed on Geet through the glass that separated their offices.

“S…SIR!” Adi cried trying to get his attention. Emmerson’s office was driving him mad.

“WHAT?” Maan glared at him ferociously.

Adi jumped back from Maan’s desk as if he had been stung. “Err …D…Dan…I…I …”

“Adi why are you wasting my time?” Maan jumped up his face showing clear signs of serious frustration. “There are enough thick headed people for me to deal with.” His eyes stared at Geet like laser beams, Adi followed his gaze through the glass at Geet who had her back to them and was pointedly ignoring Maan.

“B..But they are demanding a meeting.”

“Demanding? I really don’t like those sort of business clients!”

“India is opening its borders to new businesses they want to get into India’s growing markets especially construction and development and they want to make us their partner, that’s what I have been told …M..Maan sir we should at least m…meet with them to see if there is an opportunity for KC?”

Hands on hips Maan muttered, “OK fix it! But KC or I don’t like that kind of attitude, if they want to do business with us it will be on our terms.”

Adi grinned and turned to walk out, when Maan suddenly blocked his way bearing down on him like a furious dragon.

“Geet is your good friend isnt she, has she said anything to you about it?”

“About .w…w..what?” Adi shrank back in fear.

“Babli’s school! I have been trying to get it into her thick head to put her in the school I have in mind, they will enrol Chotu too, but no she HAS to defy me at every step.”

“Err no she hasn’t said anything to me , b…but maybe she has said something to P…Pinky.”

“Pinky!” Maan muttered under his breath. Grabbing the receiver on his desk and stabbing the numbers furiously he barked into the phone, “PINKY come into my office NOW!”

Geet walked out of her office just as Pinky walked past her muttering something under her breath.

“What’s the matter Pinky?”

“Your Maans SIR suddenly wants to see me!” She grinned at Maan’s thunder cloud of a face through the glass. “Looks like he has swallowed a whole lemon, Geet why don’t you talk to him?”

“What’s the point he is not listening.” her face set, she folded her arms in a defiant pose.

Maan strode out of the office and glared pointedly at Pinky, “Err Pinky I need to see you urgently!”

Geet strode up to him with narrowed eyes.“Maan, why do you want to see her, if its about work I should be there too.”

“Geet there is no need to interfere in my business….” his eyes narrowed on her angry face…”AS you keep telling me!”

“Fine! Have it your way, Pinky I am sure he wants to ask you something very interesting…not!”

Pinky grinned at the two of them, “Evening show ke liye ticket zaroor bechna, it will be a sell out!”

“huh…huh…huh..huh,” Adi laughed.


“Bas all you know is how to shout!” muttered Geet at him.

“If you listened without blowing my head off you will see that what I am saying is right!”

“Uff! I have a meeting, I am going.” Glaring at him she went off back to her office to collect things.

With an exasperated sigh he nodded for Pinky to go into his office. She walked past him and stood near the glass watching Geet collect her things.


“Before you say anything let me just say one thing….Maan I know you love Geet, and you know she is stubborn, infact I think that’s one of the most endearing traits about her you love.”

His eyes darkened at that statement, it was so true,” but Pinky she is wrong in this matter. Babli and Chotu’s future is in question I wont let her atma saman get in the way of giving them the best chance in life I possibly can. After all they are my responsibility too! I love them both.”

“I know you do, and Geet does too, but you have to understand that she feels she is the one who has to bear the cost of their schooling.”

Eyes stormy he turned to Pinky and said, “Somehow, I have to make her see sense.”

“Then you will have to try to convince her in some other way, giving her an ultimatum is not going to work.”

He took a deep breath, yes he knew all that, but how to get past it. Why wouldn’t she accept him for what he was. He had worked hard for his money, just as she did. He had built on his grandparents foundations and made KC what it was today. He had to make her see that.

What had she said to him as she flounced out of their bedroom this morning, ‘Maan I didn’t marry you for you money! I can manage their futures quite well on my earnings.’

When he had married her he thought she had accepted him for all that he was, but obviously she hadn’t, if she had she would not be making such an issue out of the this.

“Err thank you Pinky, I am sorry…I shouldn’t drag you into this.”

“I am quite enjoying it,” Pinky grinned with her own inimitable style, making Adi chuckle again. “Do you want me to speak to Geet? I know what are aiming to do will be good for Babli and Chotu.”

Why didn’t Geet see that! Turning to Pinky with a sigh he said ‘No, I will deal with it.” And this time he was not going to take no for an answer


29 responses to “TPRS2 – chap 1 to 35

  1. naina

    January 5, 2014 at 11:28 am

    LATE HAPPY NEW YEAR DEAR…..season 2 of TPR….sure im gonna enjoy it as much like s1……god……geet is still stubborn……poor maan

    • janememe

      January 5, 2014 at 12:29 pm

      Geet isnt going to change ;)) and nor is Maan! heheheh they are set in stone- I hope u do keep on enjoying Naina :))

  2. TeeJey-TJ

    January 5, 2014 at 11:34 am

    hahaha….. still the same argument… Geet is seesly a thick headed person….
    make her understand… she’s hurting Maan….
    congrats for the new season…. this is gonna be more fun im sure… 😀
    keep writing… love u loads… 🙂 😀 :* ❤

    • janememe

      January 5, 2014 at 12:28 pm

      I hope so too ;)) lets see!Thanks for reading 😉

  3. honeygrape

    January 5, 2014 at 12:09 pm

    wooooow…and you are back janey 🙂 loveed the 1st part of season 2 …yay!!! so happy that you started another season of the story….never stop writing on maaneet…write lots n lots n lots 🙂 love your writing

    • janememe

      January 5, 2014 at 12:30 pm

      LOL Honey I willl try and keep writing Maneet as long as I can ;)) thankssssssssss for loving my writing! so appreciated!

  4. karamjeet

    January 5, 2014 at 12:37 pm

    Awesome update… Madhubala ff kay saath saath Geet ff tooo….loved it….plzzzzz continue soon…

  5. karamjeet

    January 5, 2014 at 12:42 pm

    Jane dear i didn’t read ur 1st Season of dis ff soooo plzzzz can u give Season 1 link too…..

    • janememe

      January 5, 2014 at 1:32 pm

      Karamjeet Season one is on Top menu and then on right hand menu- all 78 parts- The Phoenix Rises a Maaneet story

      • karamjeet

        January 5, 2014 at 1:53 pm


      • janememe

        January 5, 2014 at 2:00 pm

        welcome ji 😉

  6. anupamachem

    January 5, 2014 at 2:12 pm

    Loved to read TRP2 with beloved Maaneet and the same old arguments. Its going to be fun.

  7. menakkrish

    January 5, 2014 at 4:58 pm

    Lovely:-):-) season 2…wow seems interesting…all the very best for the same:-):-)

    • janememe

      January 6, 2014 at 10:11 am

      I hope I do keep your interest! keep reading 😉

  8. beena

    January 5, 2014 at 5:50 pm

    oh oh we r in the second season hun wonderful congratulations on completing season 1 successfully 🙂 so stubborn geet isn’t agreeing to maan ideas or should i say him command, but our geet is not the one who would bend so easily 😉 i also see adi n pinky r having fun 😉 wonderful update. lovedddddd it 🙂

    • janememe

      January 6, 2014 at 10:13 am

      Thanks Beena 😉 Yes more Adi n Pinky is needed and of-course our two stubborn headed mules 😉

  9. Annie Jose

    January 6, 2014 at 5:11 am

    Fab start with bickering galore 🙂

    • janememe

      January 6, 2014 at 10:14 am

      I know u love it Annie 😉

  10. Chetna

    January 6, 2014 at 6:11 am

    hi dear! Happy New Year! Congrats on season 2! Rocking update! Maan n Geet r both stubborn! Poor Adi bt Pinky seems to b enjoying ! So wt will he do?? update soon! Well written! 🙂

    • janememe

      January 6, 2014 at 10:14 am

      Happy New Year to you too Chetna! Thank you sweets will update sunday

  11. savitha.

    January 6, 2014 at 12:03 pm

    Congratulations on the second season Janey..I am sure it is going to be a joyous ride as the first season. Already loving the first chapter..:D Good luck babes!! :*

    • janememe

      January 6, 2014 at 9:52 pm

      thanks hope u like and keep enjoying Savitha

  12. savitha.

    January 6, 2014 at 12:06 pm

    hey, btw, I was re re re reading Test of love last week..Singhania is left to die in the sand dunes of Dubai, but we don’t know what happens to can he make a come back??? Jo bhi hai I am already in love with the second season!

    • janememe

      January 6, 2014 at 9:52 pm

      Hmmm Iwas thinking about him too – badmash badman I did love him a lot;))

      • Savitha

        January 7, 2014 at 3:34 am

        It occurred to be just before dosing off last night that singhania has no connection with this maan & geet…so how to fit him here 🙂

      • janememe

        January 7, 2014 at 9:12 am

        Savitha you were worrying about that?? LOL you let me worry about that, kaha se kaha chipkana mera job hai ;))

      • Savitha

        January 8, 2014 at 3:00 am

        Lol…worrying is not my job..:-P singhania is most welcome..he needs a pay back from major saab for downing his whiskey 😉

      • janememe

        January 8, 2014 at 10:02 am

        And what an expensive bottle it was! Major Saab thoroughly enjoyed it too ;))


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