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TPR2 chap 33- Broken trust

Hellooooooooooo shellooooooooooooo TPR time again. I short dollop as I get into the mood again ;)) its been a VERY busy few weeks with work so a small serving is all I can manage. Hope you guys enjoy as I give you a filler with full on emotion- err I promise it wont be as painful as the dentist kind! ;)))))))

DO comment and tell me what you liked or didn’t!

Chapter 33

“Well!” Mrs Chaddha stood watching Maan stride to Major Saab’s car and get in. “I didn’t see that happening!”

“Neither did I.” Geet muttered still shaken up by the recent events. Maan had never ever left her alone like that in the middle of nowhere with instructions to get herself home.

“I will check the cards tonight Geet dear- you don’t worry, see what’s in store for you.” Concerned as she saw how valiantly Geet was holding back her tears.

“No….. Mrs Chaddha thank you-,” Geet reached around and hugged her, “you have been amazing! Without you I don’t think we could have caught Singhania so quickly and saved Maan. I…we cant thank you enough.” Blinking back her tears she smiled.

“I have thoroughly enjoyed myself, with you all. You are all my dear friends, I want to you to come and visit me whenever you can.”

“And your friends are definitely our friends.” Adi laughed as a chicken clucked happily at his feet.

“Yes my chickens are wonderful aren’t they? I am sure Molly will take these three under her wing so to speak.”she laughed making Pinky giggle.

Geet’s tummy grumbled loudly, “err I better go home and tell Daadima and the children the good news.” she said without much enthusiasm. Maan’s anger had her completely thrown she didn’t know what to expect from him now.

“And yes Adi if you can find me a taxi I will get going too, Molly and the rest will be wandering where I am.”

“We can take you home..” Adi replied mindful of Maan sir’s instructions.

“Arey nahi Adi you go and take Pinky for a big burger I think she needs to eat after all this excitement.!

“No… no I am fine.” Pinky replied quickly even as her tummy rumbled. Making Mrs Chaddha and Adi laugh, but Geet was still in her own world her eyes clouded with worry.

“Nahi I will manage, its such a long way back you will get stranded again.”

Mr Bhoot sprang to Adi’s mind and he paled. “Err ok if you really think you will fine Mrs Chaddha?”

“Yes yes…chalo lets find a taxi that will take me home.” Mrs Chaddha swept up the chickens in her arms.

“Mrs Chaddha let me pay your fare at least.” Geet offered pulling out some money.

“Areyyy beti nahi! I can manage to pay my way home. Now off you go. Your Maan will already be thinking and worrying that he left you alone.”

“Not this time. This time he is really angry at me.” Chewing her lip with worry.

“I am sure he will come around, I have never seen a couple that were so well matched.”

Goodbyes were said and Adi and Pinky escorted Mrs Chaddha back to the main road to look for a taxi. Geet too walked towards the main road but in the other direction as finding a taxi from the other side would be going in the right direction for home.

As she walked she rang home. “Daadima I will be home soon, we errr caught Singhania.”

“Geet beta that is very good news indeed. Well done! Is Maan with you?” Excited, daadima wanted to congratulate them both. “Where are you?”

“ Patel Nagar. No…he went to file a report with Major Saab, they went to see the ACP.”

“And he left you there alone? Puzzled daadima questioned….Maan never left her alone like that before.”and Geet beta why do you sound so forlorn?”

Geet blinked back her tears, Daadima was so astute, nothing got past her sharp brain. “Err its nothing.”

“Has Maan said something to you?” Daadima questioned further. “I know he can be quite curt when he is angry, but you know by now he doesn’t mean it.”

“No..its not that Daadima…this time he really is very angry with me. He thinks I don’t trust him.” It tumbled out of her.

What had happened now between them that had made Maan so mad? Daadima chewed over that for a few seconds. “Geet beta, it must be because he was worried about you.”

“Perhaps…but I was only trying to protect him.” she added with conviction. Geet decided what she had done was right, he probably would have done the same if he was in her place.

A smile broke out on daadima’s face. “Just come home beti, I am sure by the time he comes back home he will have calmed down. After all you have just managed to catch Singhania!”

“I hope so.”

At police HQ….

Maan sat listening to Major Saab and the ACP putting all the details together on the report but not hearing. Even the euphoria that he should have been feeling at having finally caught Singhania the man that he had been after for years didn’t kick in. What WAS the matter with him?

He knew what the matter was. His lips pursed tightly as he quietly fumed. He should be happy…he should be ecstatic but all he could think about was Geet’s mistrust of him. She didn’t trust him to protect her.

How she had kept the detail of the mobile phone hidden from. If she had kept such a huge thing hidden from him, what else had she kept hidden. His brain filled with red mist. Flashes of the times he had run after her when she hadn’t told him her whereabouts or the fact that she had run into trouble filled his mind. His thoughts brewed and grew into dark beasts that refused to dissipate.

He’d had it with her running head first into trouble ALL the time. He was the boss of this marriage. He was going to tell her from now on their relationship would be by his rules or NOT AT ALL.

 

19 responses to “TPR2 chap 33- Broken trust

  1. ramykrish

    April 5, 2015 at 12:19 pm

    Nice lollipop Jane.Maan is very mad at Geet this time.NOT AT ALL is a very big word for Geet.It should be very painful for her.I was expecting a big dhamaka update from u because GHSP 5 Anniv.Its ok.Next week compensate 😉😉

     
    • janememe

      April 5, 2015 at 4:34 pm

      Haha my Maan n Geet do things in their own time ;)) glad you liked….lets see if I manage an update nxt week!

       
  2. Naina

    April 5, 2015 at 12:22 pm

    Geet dear……..you are in a big trouble …….but somewhere me too think geet didn’t trust maan enough to tell him everything ……but still very disappointed over maan’s thought about their marriage .

     
    • janememe

      April 5, 2015 at 4:35 pm

      Lolll its the red mist- it clouds his brainnnnnn- glad u enjoyed ;))

       
  3. mansiahmed

    April 5, 2015 at 1:28 pm

    This is going.to take a bad shape uhhh NOT AT ALL a very bad for geet he will tell this in anger but although she kept secret its out of love n her protective nature this is why he fallen love with her she is independent strong she takes her decision now he alone will rule n he will be the boss thought he is going to hurt her badly now i am worried😓

     
    • janememe

      April 5, 2015 at 4:36 pm

      why worry? every couple have their ups and downs. Lets see what happens. Chilllllllll

       
  4. honeygrape

    April 5, 2015 at 2:33 pm

    oww….maan is soo mad at her…wonder how she is going to tone down his anger this time…and the part where he will dictate the rules to her sounds so scary…i dont think that she will accept those rules at all…hey babaji, yeh toh war hone ki shuruwaat dikhing… lovely one jane…thanku for the part 🙂

     
    • janememe

      April 5, 2015 at 4:37 pm

      WW3 wrestling match ;)))) Should be funnnnnnnnn buahahahahha glad you enjoyed babes 😉

       
  5. Annie Jose

    April 5, 2015 at 3:28 pm

    Oh dear me Maan re “My way or Highway” wont work with Geet 😣

     
    • janememe

      April 5, 2015 at 8:40 pm

      well matched they are…

       
  6. TeeJey-TJ

    April 5, 2015 at 6:27 pm

    Short yet sweet update Janey…
    This relation on his rules or not as all…😨😨
    Ita Maan’s way or sky way… Nhiiiiiiiii….😱😱
    Next one seems to be a very heated update…
    Heated as in with argument… :-p
    N heated as in, with making up stuff….
    But dont make it tkk heart breaking… I’m already upset
    Tht they r fighting with each other…
    Waiting for next part…. Keep writing… 🙂 :-* ❤

     
    • janememe

      April 6, 2015 at 7:33 pm

      Heated, hot, furious, fast, defo made up ;))) will keep writing something- I hope! Glad you loved it ;)))

       
  7. karam80

    April 7, 2015 at 3:14 pm

    Superbbbbb….
    i’m with Maan… Geet always do this type of stunts & didn’t tell about her plans to Maan….
    Excited 4 their face off now…
    continue soon..

     
    • janememe

      April 9, 2015 at 11:11 am

      face off !! Yikesssssss will try to cont as soon as i can ;)) glad you enjoyed 😉

       
  8. Chetna

    April 11, 2015 at 5:29 pm

    lovely update! superbly written! sorry 4 late comments! Maan still angry! dadi assures her! wt did Maan mean by NOT AT ALL??

     
  9. sgayatri

    April 17, 2015 at 7:26 am

    so time for dadi to again step in to help geet is dadi again going to make maan jealous &help geet in maan manofying mission

     
    • janememe

      April 19, 2015 at 9:26 am

      oohhhhhhhh Gayatri interesting thought ;))

       
  10. preetialbert2013

    April 19, 2015 at 11:43 am

    Geet saved maan and maan tjought geet again didn’t trust him…in next part simple is trying to creat MU between maaneet ..
    maan is so much angry ready to hurt geet…
    waiting to see what is going to happen when maan knows that geet has seen him with simple in a bedroom

     
    • janememe

      April 19, 2015 at 1:09 pm

      Yes me too waiting to see what happenes when Maan sees Geet and Simple sees Maan and Geet see them both! heheheehe
      glad you enjoyed! Thanks for your comment 😉

       

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